Version # 1
See the world clearly
Both the darkness and the Light
Free yourself by choice
© 2023 M.N. Hopkins
Version # 2
See the world clearly
Both the darkness and the Light
Control your own mind
© 2023 M.N. Hopkins
Version # 3
See the world clearly
Both the darkness and the Light
See through all the lies
© 2023 M.N. Hopkins
Version # 4
See the world clearly
Both the darkness and the Light
Liberate you mind
© 2023 M.N. Hopkins
Version # 5
See the world clearly
Both the darkness and the Light
Freedom awaits you
© 2023 M.N. Hopkins
Note: To see ones life or the world clearly is the first step toward liberation. After that, action is required. I wrote these five poems in the haiku style of poetry with the same theme yet by changing one verse giving it a slightly different meaning in each of the five poems. If you would be so kind as to record the number of the poem in the comment section that most resonated with you personally. I published these five poems for the first time today, the 16th of January, 2023.
2 comments:
They work well together in the order you've presented. The 4th one resonates with me the best. #5 is very close second.
Thanks so much for the input, MZ.
Kindest regards,
Mike
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